Entry for Ghosts contest

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Ok so here's my entry for Ghosts contest I chose to use my character Theo because it was one of the easiest to change his story around for him to be evil instead of good.

So I have a lot for Theo's original story but I'm only going to to talk about the part that I changed to change him from a good to an evil character.

WARNING's for mentions of homophobia, abuse both mental and physical, death, and depression.

So in Theo's original story he's living with a foster family thats actually really loving and taking care of him and they are set to adopt him. He has been living with the family for about 2 years since he was 12 years old but a week before his 15th birthday they learn that he is bisexual and then being a very very over the top religious family decide that they are going to "fix" him. They end up beating him with a riding crop among other things leaving many scars and alot of emotional damage. But this isnt the first bad foster care family he's been through and he's had enough of being abused by people so he tells someone what's happening and they can't hide it because he has the scars and injuries to prove it. Because he does this he goes back into the system until they can find another foster family for him. This is where Leon's family comes in they agree to foster him even though he's considered to be a troubled teen. Even though things are going well Theo is hesitant to trust them but slowly over time they build his trust and they become a close family. Theo begins looking up to Leon and they begin spending alot of time together they are practically best friends. Eventually Leon's family does adopt Theo and things are good even when the war comes later in the story long after Theo is an adult they are still close and they fight a good fight as the rebels.

So in my revised version of Theo's story to make him evil I had to change some of this up a bit. So the beginning is the same with his foster family physically and mentally abusing him because of his sexuality but instead of telling someone and saving himself Theo runs away. He lives on the streets for a year and a half and then he meets him the cloak one of my bad guys/villains in the story. The cloak offers him a safe place to be who he is both as a person and as the hunted silver blood. The cloak takes him under his wing and trains him teaches him all that he knows and by the point in the story that lines up with the start of my actual story he would be a ruthless killing machine who has no problem using his powers. He is the cloaks right hand man and fights on his side in the war instead of the rebels. Instead of the side of the family and friends he would have in his original story.

So anyways I hope you all like what I came up with please enjoy