Hiya, it’s Jay; welcome to my submission for the Flash Challenge #Leaderreview
Fear
I could taste it
Like bitter rocks of salt on my dry, swollen tongue
I could smell it dripping from my pores, coating my paper white skin in its slick oil
The stench sour, rotten, terrifying
I could hear it’s voice, rasping, croaking in my ear
”It’s going to go off….”
”It’s going to go off…”
”They’re all going to die…”
”And it will be your fault….”
”All your fault…”
I could feel it’s ice cold, twig like feelers
wrap their frighteningly vicious grip around my neck
Choking me without mercy.
A single thought fought it’s way to my scarily numb brain
A mind lost in the black terror
”You’re there. Let it go…”
I hadn’t realised my eyes had been closed
I hadn’t realised they were dripping pain
I hadn’t realised I was alive
Until I opened my eyes
Fear
It gripped my very soul as I stared into the abyss
Watching it stare back
And let it go
Watching it soar toward fear
My fear
It shattered my fear like glass
But it wasn’t over yet
The shards still fell
Dangerous
Sharp
Terrifying
And with them
So did I
Like lead I dropped
My body a stone
Being tossed by giant hands
Into a river of inky black terror
I fall
And I fall
And I fall
Consumed wholly
Trapped in the gaping maw of some
Indescribable primal monster
Fear
I’m so tired
Just
Just let me rest
And I give myself to the darkness once more
It’s peaceful here
Except for one thing
Fear
Is always hiding
Fear
Is always lurking
Fear
Is everywhere
Fear
Has consumed me
Fear
Has beat m-
I wake
To the sounds of roaring
Of pain
And oddly
Of triumph
And now my fear
Is gone
It drowned
It died
It lost
My fear is no more
And now I’m hungry
I kinda want
Shawarma
Comments (2)
That's so amazing! Just plain beautiful. (Love that "I kinda want Shawarma" at the end 🤣)
TYSM :heart: