OC Review | Reisu Taiyou

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To submit your OC to be

critiqued, go here. Today,

I'll be reviewing Taiyou.

Note that this post is

significantly shorter. This

is due to the lack of

information of personality

or backstory in the OC's wiki.

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The description of the quirk

leaves much to be desired.

Kinetic energy is the energy

of a moving object; what does

storing and releasing it mean?

If Taiyou can "steal" the kinetic

energy from something else,

does that mean the object is

immediately made to stop moving?

If so, the implications are already

pretty powerful; any hit against

him would prove useless, as

the impact would never happen.

Then there's the question of

how he releases the kinetic

energy. Is he able to replace

his own kinetic energy with the

kinetic energy he's stored,

potentially making his hits more

lethal? Or does releasing the

kinetic energy entail giving the

energy back to whatever item

originally had it, resuming it's

movement? There are so many

possibilities; the quirk description

is extremely vague, and needs to

specify what "storing" and

"releasing" kinetic energy

entails.

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There isn't much to say

about Taiyou's appearance.

There are only three categories

listed: skin color, build, and

hair color(which doesn't

match with the face claims

provided). The face claims

are all of different characters,

with the only similarity

being that they're all blonde.

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