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Hello there everyone, so this post is away from all the art fight madness, Here’s a I’d say short story written by me. I don’t have much to say other than I hope you all enjoy reading it!

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988 words | 5724 characters

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”Are you sure we should do this?” Seafoam asked Rose Pearl, “Yes! Come on! We’re so close to finishing our plan. We can finally be together!”, Rose Pearl replied. Then they heard a gem’s footsteps. “Oh hello! Pearls?!? Ugh how frustrating! They’re never here. Jadeite seriously can you believe it?” Poudretteite, the owner of the pearls, said. “You’re being very generous with them, I would just shatter them personally. Or have you tried the pearl care center?”, Jadeite asked. “I think that will be my next option, when I find these two delinquents!”, Poudretteite answered.

Seafoam started shaking, “Did... Did you... hear... that... Rose?”, she said stuttering in her words. “It’ll be alright Seafoam! Just the plan”, Rose Pearl replied. Seafoam sighed, “Alright.”. Seafoam and Rose began to walk together then they stopped. Suddenly a door opened, this wasn’t any door to anywhere, this was their secret room, where they’ve been planning, planning something, something big.

”The scythe is ready” Rose Pearl said, “Are you really sure about this...?” Seafoam said nervously. “Yes, now come on! One last step left” Rose replied. She then continued: “So you’ll serve as a distraction and talk to her, and then I strike, and we just run”. “Alright then...” Seafoam said, then exited.

A few hours ed, and then the door opened. “Alright she’s in her seating area with the other high classes”, Seafoam told Rose. “Perfect” Rose replied. Rose walked, the scythe hidden in her gem, and Seafoam preparing herself to distract Poudretteite.

”There you are!” Poudretteite said looking at the pearls angrily. Rose and Seafoam both looked at each other. “Uh my Poudretteite... how was your day?”, Seafoam asked, to distract Poudretteite. And it worked, she always got distracted, from everything. “Well I had an alright day...” she said, and then Rose ran with the scythe in the air, then she jumped and cut through Poudretteite’s form, and she was gone, poofed. The crowd was in shock, you could hear everyone gasping. “Guards!” One of the gems called, and suddenly a group of quartzes arrived, chasing after the Pearls.

”What do we do?!?!” Seafoam asked, “Don’t worry, Ive got this” Rose said. You could see the determination in her eyes. After one cut all the quartzes were poofed. The crowd of high class gems were in shock, they couldn’t fight. All of them started running, scrambling to get away from the chaos. But Rose stopped them, jumping in front of them, with anger in her eyes.   “What are you doing?!?!” Seafoam asked, confused. “I’ve got an announcement to make. I am sick and tired of being your servant. I am sick of my role here on homeworld. I don’t want order. I want chaos. I want madness. And I want you all DEAD.” Rose Pearl announced, with a menacing look on her face. “Rose... I thought we agreed that...” Seafoam said, then she was interrupted by Rose “Shut up! You know Sea, you’re really dumb. You fell for me, just like you fell for my tricks. But I have the power now. I can do what I want now. And it’s all in this scythe, one slice and a gem is poofed, and if I wanted to I could shatter them. I could shatter you”.

”Rose No! What’s gone into you? I thought, we were friends.... I thought, we were... lovers” Seafoam told Rose. Rose started laughing an evil laugh, “Lovers?!?! I never loved you, I never loved anyone. And no one ever loved me. And the fact that you fell for that trick amazes me. I thought you were smarter, but you’re not. “ , then she continued, “I think this place needs a makeover, more chaos, less gems. More me.”. “Time to cause a ruckus.”. Pearl ran to her room. Crying, drowning in her own tears. “I thought we were soulmates... we were meant to be together... but... she LIED....” she said, speaking to herself. And then Seafoam started to show anger, “Ughh! I need to tell the diamonds!”.

Meanwhile, Rose was causing trouble and creating chaos. “This is wonderful, isn’t it. No more buildings for the elites, just for me! Seafoam!” She said while laughing. Many of the buildings on homeworld were on fire, their structure falling apart, the spires tearing down, the buildings slowly crumbling.

”What do you need? Aren’t you supposed to be with your Poudretteite?” Yellow asked Seafoam. “Well, yes my diamond..... but... let me explain...” Seafoam then explained everything to Yellow and Blue. “So.. you’re saying that a Pearl poofed a Poudretteite..? And destroyed our buildings...?” Blue asked Seafoam. “Yes... my diamond..” Seafoam answered. “Blue there’s no time to talk, our empire is falling apart. We can’t let White know about this!”, Yellow told Blue. The two diamonds both ran towards the outside, causing the ground to slightly shake.

Then they saw Rose standing on top of a tower, laughing. “Where did she get that scythe?!?!” Yellow asked. “She uh... made it..., it took a few months to make...” Seafoam replied. “Whatever, Blue come on!” Rose then saw the two Diamonds, “Ugh. These two. They’re even worse than Poudretteite” Rose then ran, jumping from building to building. Yellow and Blue were both trying to attack Rose, but she kept on dodging. Finally Seafoam had the courage to run after Rose.

Seafoam finally caught up, “Rose! That’s enough!” She said. “What do you want?” Rose asked Seafoam, clearly annoyed, which could be seen from her facial expression. “I’ve had enough of you Rose! You used me! I thought you were different, but you used me to achieve your own goal! And I won’t let that go by!” Seafoam said, for the first time she was extremely angry, to the point where you could see the anger in her face. Tears began rolling down her face.

”You want a fight? Well you’re getting one!”

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Thank you all for reading, I hope you enjoyed it and what did you guys think of what Rose Pearl did? Should I make this a series?

#writingcuratorreview

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It's good! It would make an interesting short series. I'd say there's a few grammar errors here and there but it's an eash fix. Next time try using less dialogue and more action writing ^^" hope the helps, i can link some pinterest posts to help with writing if you want

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Thank you so much for the ! I wanted to focus on dialogue to show the relationship between the Rose and Seafoam so yea haha

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