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Hello everyone! I am Tea here with another poetic post. Today I bring you all a Toriel based poem! I wasn't necessarily inspired to write this, I just felt like I should.
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This poem is about what Toriel thinks and how she feels towards fighting the human at the end of the RUINS.
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Information
Time Taken: Around 30-45 minutes
Art by: Xishka on Weasyl
App(s) Used: Amino App
Word Count: 141
Character Count: 724
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Without further or do, onwards to the poem!
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I am Toriel, caretaker of the RUINS.
You seem new here, my child,
So let me be of good influence.
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I can see what you're planning, what you're doing.
Such a human, you are beguiled.
A Queen's Heartbreak is more than mild.
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A hurting soul, nearly translucent.
I know you want to leave, but I must not leave you to be exiled.
So let me be of good influence.
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Your glare creepily noctilucent;
Your form of weaponry and clothing defiled.
A Queen's Heartbreak is more than mild.
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This world is so inconclusive,
For we are just dust and matter compiled.
So let me be of good influence.
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Child, please don't be a nuisance!
You looked to me and all you could do at the end was smile!
So let me be of good influence.
A Queen's Heartbreak is more than mild.
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Thanks for spending your time and reading my post/poem. I hope you enjoyed it!
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Comments (45)
So beautiful hun :yellow_heart:
Thank you, fellow Fish! ^^
I wuv it!!!
Eyyyy its Misty!
*makes a Thomas Sanders face*
Reply to: :trident: ⚜ :yellow_heart: Alphys :yellow_heart: ⚜ :trident:
Yassss
Reply to: :sparkling_heart: Misty :sparkling_heart:
Yummy
Great post. I like it!
Thank you!
AMAZING!! I LOVE IT ON HOW YOU USED SOME BIG WORDS IN THE POEM!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
Thank you, I'll be sure too!