—The Land Of Treasures—
Embrace the death that gave you birth
Oh hail the curse that blessed you free
Perceive the stigma of mirth
March the hymns of irony
Temporary is what comes with fame
Undying is a practised ion flame.
The tree I sowed in my gifted land
shall take a hundred years before it reaps
it would need water from a thousand hands
after I'm gone, it will be the life I seeped.
The living doesn't die until it's forgotten
he lives as many years his stories do.
The certitude ignites the will to do great
that even history s of inventions and discoveries
of the lives one sacrificed and saved
of the turmoil toiled and peace wrecked.
To be ed as revolutionaries
those that defied 'a single can't make a change'.
Strive to live as an old soul with a young spirit
aware of the atrocities yet full of light
who finds pride in the little steps of development
for evolution is a constant journey not destination
Embrace the cons of your neighbour
they are but humans too.
Author's Note
This poem is inspired from Ma City which gives an insight to another beautiful theme conveyed by BTS in their 'Hwa Yang Yeon Hwa ' album. The song talks about how the boys take pride in their homeland and no matter how big and successful they become there's no place that gives more comfort than the one they've spent their childhood in.
There's this attachment we all have with our motherland that even if it's underdeveloped or in the process of developing and has more cons to point out, we'd always stand for it if something ever goes wrong. Exactly what the main theme of this poem is— embracing the free land we're born on because alot of great people have spent their whole lives dedicated to it because of whom we're living a comfortable life. One should have an aim in life and ion for it, as it's the most important thing that leads to success. A person should also try to be understanding because no one or anything is made of full perfection, we all have flaws and we can only work on them for our own betterment but we first have to acknowledge them.
There's a mention of alot of tragedies and main archives of the ' hometowns which shows that Korea, one of the most civilized and well provided country also had alot of struggle to be in the race of democracy and power. Only with the development of human brain can a nation evolve because only then it can use it's resources to the fullest and find pride in it.
A poem can always have multiple interpretations, this is one I initially thought of, feel free to share yours as well!<3
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Comments (13)
PLEASE this is a masterpiece i am emotional and speechless wow- :sob: :sob: :sob: :sob: :heartpulse: , I can’t describe how amazing this is via cutie just perfection !! 🥺
Thankkk you lovely, it's always encouraging to see your comments :purple_heart:
Reply to: 𝘳ain's serenade| #theastronaut
Awwww yww!!🥰🥰 :heartpulse:
this is a true art i'm sobbing :pensive: :sob: :purple_heart:
Skskksks thank you so much!!
rain, on some of your skills to this poor soul
Reply to: 𝘳ain's serenade| #theastronaut
wdyem no. if we're talking about talent, it's definitely you. everyone would agree. i am literally a nobody infront of you :raised_hands:
i mean, i never really said it before and i might not be the best with words but, reading your poems do really calm me down and immerse me in? M SORRY IF I DON'T MAKE ANY SENSE BUT YK LIKE,
they're just so beautiful and amazing
now if we ignore the fact that it sends me to google for every second line to look up for definitions or translations ajsks- i mean, my english is kinda limited, sorry :skull:
Reply to: reinx.
OMGAWD YOU DID NOT JUST— please this is the cutest you can get because I'm not letting you anymore, nOw listen : YOU'RE LITERALLY ONE OF THE BEST EDITORS AND A VERY HARDWORKING CONTENT CREATOR WHOSE TALENT IS UNIQUE IN ITS OWN WAY AND I AM SO IN LOVE WITH IT HUMPH you're not a nObOdY!!! and most of the times I don't make sense either :3
i wanted to be the first one to like this post, what is this :broken_heart:
well you're the first one to post a comment so ksjsk :two_hearts:
Reply to: 𝘳ain's serenade| #theastronaut
oh right, first comment :muscle: