Gas is out
Lights are dim
Right then, I hear a shout
And then I grin.
I smile as I
Open my door
I look down at myself
And then at the floor
You think you can see me
But can you really?
Am I here clearly?
Or am I not trustworthy?
Everything fades as you cough
You hear a sudden, steady drop
And when you look to the ground
There's no body found
I'm lost within the smoke.
Im dying, oh I'm choking
Torture of the demon smoking
If I forgive you, am I trustworthy?
Or does that let me not get off freely?
I brainstorm, I brainstorm
Look, my mind's torn!
Half blind, half deaf
Right now is a good time for me to be d-
I'm weakening in the smoke
Of the the problems my body promotes
You must fight yourself
To stay at full health.
The more I struggle
The lighter I get,
That's when I realize
I let the smoke win.
I'm a goner,
From this sick smoke
There is no way out
This is not a joke.
If I can be saved,
And move on a day,
The smoke will end,
And I will stay awake.
Save each other from the smoke.
If they choke, I choke.
Help us,
We're broke.
Thank you for the feature, I didn't actually expect this one to be featured, as it seemed kinda sad. Thank you guys so much though :purple_heart: ⚘
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[Ci] Lights are dim
[Ci] Right then, I hear a shout
[Ci] And then I grin.
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Comments (13)
Very beautiful and emotional
Thank you :two_hearts:
It's a masterpiece! This poem is worthy of respect! :clap: :clap: :clap:
Thank you:) up this was definitely my most time consuming poem so I'm honestly glad you like it! :sunflower: :yellow_heart:
Reply to: R Ø Ø M I E
Congratulations! I really liked it!
Reply to: :top: Bandito Girl :top:
Thank you! I'm glad you did :yellow_heart:
Roomie, poet and song producer on youtube. Who knew
We'll of course I am
Reply to: R Ø Ø M I E
Ecks dee
:100:
This is amazing, fren :hearts: :raised_hands: all your poems are wonderful
Thank you :punch: :sparkling_heart:
Reply to: R Ø Ø M I E
Of course :heartpulse: