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Smoke

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:leopard: . 04/10/19
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Gas is out

Lights are dim

Right then, I hear a shout

And then I grin.

I smile as I

Open my door

I look down at myself

And then at the floor

You think you can see me

But can you really?

Am I here clearly?

Or am I not trustworthy?

Everything fades as you cough

You hear a sudden, steady drop

And when you look to the ground

There's no body found

I'm lost within the smoke.

Im dying, oh I'm choking

Torture of the demon smoking

If I forgive you, am I trustworthy?

Or does that let me not get off freely?

I brainstorm, I brainstorm

Look, my mind's torn!

Half blind, half deaf

Right now is a good time for me to be d-

I'm weakening in the smoke

Of the the problems my body promotes

You must fight yourself

To stay at full health.

The more I struggle

The lighter I get,

That's when I realize

I let the smoke win.

I'm a goner,

From this sick smoke

There is no way out

This is not a joke.

If I can be saved,

And move on a day,

The smoke will end,

And I will stay awake.

Save each other from the smoke.

If they choke, I choke.

Help us,

We're broke.

#poetry

Thank you for the feature, I didn't actually expect this one to be featured, as it seemed kinda sad. Thank you guys so much though :purple_heart: ⚘

Smoke-[Ci] Gas is out

[Ci] Lights are dim

[Ci] Right then, I hear a shout

[Ci] And then I grin.

[Ci] I smile as I

[Ci] O
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It's a masterpiece! This poem is worthy of respect! :clap: :clap: :clap:

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4 Reply 04/11/19

Thank you:) up this was definitely my most time consuming poem so I'm honestly glad you like it! :sunflower: :yellow_heart:

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3 Reply 04/11/19

Reply to: :top: Bandito Girl :top:

Thank you! I'm glad you did :yellow_heart:

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3 Reply 04/12/19

This is amazing, fren :hearts: :raised_hands: all your poems are wonderful

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3 Reply 04/11/19

Reply to: R Ø Ø M I E

Of course :heartpulse:

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