How can poem writing be that hard?
Heh, you mustn't write poems.
Or have you now?
I call myself 'a hackneyed loser'
Everything I do is boring
Same old, same old
Boring.
Same old, same old.
Boring.
Why do I write poems?
Could it be a form of entertainment?
Or maybe a service?
Maybe.
Maybe.
Maybe.
But these are too dull
I can't do anything
Every poem I write
Is a different shade of gray
You know what I'm saying?
Theres nothing that stands out.
Aren't they just all about helping?
So what's the point of this poetry?
I said I don't know.
I'm sick and tired of you yelling at me
Why do I keep writing
When there's nothing new
It's all dull
Boring
I hate it
I do it
I hate it
I do it
I hate it
Can't I stop this cycle?
Maybe...
But it won't be for a while,
I'd assume.
Shut up!
That stupid voice is back again
Ruining my thinking time within my head
Yeah, woods was great and all
But what was even the point of everything followed!?
I don't know
My brain is hackneyed, don't you see?
I feel nothing
Nothing is working
Why do I try?
I dont know...
I thought for a second I could save someone's life?
I dont see a point
but I'll keep trying
but I'm just becoming more dull
a dark, boring, dull, faded, gray.

Comments (18)
I like the self awareness feel of this poem, nice job
thank you zach, i really had to try something new :revolving_hearts:
I love this so much Mark and you're so talented, your poems are always so beautiful, and thank you for the one you wrote me, it made me so happy ily :cry: :purple_heart:
thank you heidi, I love you so much and you're so encouraging :heart:
you're welcome, you deserve it.
Reply to: shreky boi 459 (ps)
You're welcome and so are you:) :purple_heart: uwu
Reply to: emily (TBØ)
:revolving_hearts: :revolving_hearts: :revolving_hearts:
Oh wow.
I really like your poems.
I don’t even like poetry, I just like your poems
Awe, thank you so much Rosie! I swear you're too sweet everytime :heart: :heart:
i love all your poems so much woah
Reply to: shreky boi 459 (ps)
of couse mark uwu :two_hearts:
Reply to: ★彡 donkey boy 彡★
:heart: :heart:
Reply to: shreky boi 459 (ps)
:yellow_heart: :yellow_heart:
You’re so good at writing :weary:
That made me smile, thank you alyssa :revolving_hearts: