Hello there, people or the DDLC Amino. I had a lot of time today, so I wrote the third chapter of my story. This time the ending is a bit more closed then the ending of the last two chapters.
If you have any suggestions how to improve my writing, comment them please.
Word count: 2245
Writing time: about 4 hours
Background made by my friend Jade
Although I waited for around five minutes only, it felt like five hours. What if no one shows up? Just then, I heard the doorbell ring. A rush of excitement went through my body, as I hastily went to the door and threw it open. On my porch were Monika and Sayori, both with backpacks on. Monika´s face was curved in a small smile, where Sayori´s smile was slightly annoyed. ,,Yuri, you really need to open the door quicker!´´ Sayori walked in while scolding me. ,,I have been standing here for three minutes already.´´ She smiled a little, so I won't take it too seriously, but it was clear that she was slightly annoyed.
,,I.... I didn't hear you ring, Sayori. I am sorry.´´ I put my head down and blushed slightly. ,,Don't worry about it too much.´´ Said Monika with a bright smile as she hugged me. ,,Sayori here didn't ring the bell. She knocked, and expected you will open. She needed me to tell her that you probably can´t hear her.´´ I let go of Monika, and looked over to Sayori, who was now clearly red and fumbled with her hands nervously. ,,That is right. Hehe.´´ I didn't take this too seriously, since I was glad they were here. I closed the door and led them into the living room, where most of the activity would take place. Then, once again the doorbell rang.
As I opened the door, I saw Natsuki with Daniel. Daniel was carrying a tray covered by paper towels, presumably Natsuki's cupcakes. I was slightly surprised that Natsuki let go of her dignity and let Daniel carry the tray for her, but then I ed she has changed quite a lot over those few weeks with him. I let them both in with a warm smile on my face, took the tray from Daniel and brought it to the kitchen. As I heard a conversation starting from the living room, I had to smile slightly. I was happy that the club has assembled here. Now only one guest was missing. I uncovered the cupcakes, which looked really nice, with the icing in typical Christmas red and green colors, and typical Christmas motives like stars, reindeers and presents. As I was about to bring the tray over to the living room, I heard knocking on the front door.
I put the tray back down and went to the door. I looked through the lens on the door, and saw Alex standing behind it. I quickly opened. ,,Good evening Alex. I am glad you could make it.´´ With a bright smile, I held the door open for her. She came in nervously and smiled at me. ,,I am glad I can be here. I am not a person of parties, but I am sure this is more of a gathering of friends, or?´´ Her smile was so sweet I barely contained my urge to hug her and not let go for some time. Instead, I closed the door. ,,Yes, basically. A sleepover, if you will. Now, if you could help me...´´ I let her take her shoes off and I took her to the kitchen, where I gave her two of the snack bowls. ,,Could you please take it to the living room?´´ As I said it, I took the tray with Natsuki's cupcakes and lead the way, hearing Alex´s soft steps behind me.
In the living room, the girls made themselves comfortable on the mattresses, while Daniel was sitting on the couch above them. While the others were greeting Alex, I put the tray on the table, took the bowls from her hands, and placed them on the table as well. I could see Alex being slightly uncomfortable that she has so much attention, but I was glad the others took her in, even though she was not a part of the club. I left Alex to her fate of attention center, and went to the kitchen once again. There, I began warming up the eggnog. While warm, the extra tastes would be even better and more intense.
After some time, when the eggnog was warm enough for my tastes, I took the pot from the stove, grabbed a big chopping board and put the pot on it, along with 6 mugs. Like this, I went to the living room, where the fun started to get even louder. As I walked in, I saw Sayori and Natsuki in a mess of intertwined limbs, fighting over something, where Daniel and Monika were making sure no actual harm will be done, and Alex just watching. ,,What is happening here? Let go of each other! Right now!´´ I was not used to command someone too much, but I learned to talk with authority from my mother.
The two separated from each other and stood up, both looking embarrassed. ,,She hit me first!´´ Sayori screeched in an over the top voice. ,,But she insulted me!´´ Natsuki protested vehemently. I took a deep breath and looked both of them in the eyes. ,,Alright. Monika, what happened for real?´´ I looked at Monika, who seemed to be suspiciously quiet. ,,Well… First, Sayori made some not so funny remarks about Natsuki and her obsession with manga. Then, she started joking about Natsuki being short. And then, Natsuki tackled her to the floor.´´ Monika answered while looking me straight in the face.
,,Alright girls. We want to have a nice evening, don't we?´´ I tried to lighten the mood. I saw Natsuki breathing in for an answer. ,,Right!?´´ Natsuki closed her mouth again, clearly upset. ,,Why don't we solve it as human beings? So, Sayori, you will apologize about your remarks. Then Natsuki apologizes for attacking Sayori. And we shall forget about it, right? We want to have a nice fightless evening after all.´´ I smiled at both of them, as they reluctantly nodded. They apologized to each other, and we didn't talk about it for the rest of the night.
After that dispute was solved, I felt the mood in the room improve significantly. Both Sayori and Natsuki were smiling and talking to each other in relative ease, and the others ed in the laughing and smiling as well. Even Alex, who was really reserved too often was actually smiling and laughing more often. I was really glad everyone is enjoying themselves. After some time, when we were just talking, eating and drinking, and after getting complimented on my eggnog by pretty much everyone (if they only knew the secret), I felt that once again the mood was stagnating, while midnight was far away. But I was prepared for this. I quickly went to my room, and fetched Activity, a board game I was keeping there. We would sometimes play it with my family on long evening, having a lot of fun. I thought it was a good thing to do with the girls (and Daniel) as well.
As I proposed that we play to the people, I was called genius and other positive names. It seemed like everyone had played the game before, so we could go straight to playing. I only had to grab a few more pieces and modify the rules slightly, so all of us could play, and we wouldn't have to team up, but then, everything was ready and we started playing. It was a lot of fun. Alex, although normally reserved and timid went full competitive, and when she had to silently show us what a psychologist means, we could not stop laughing. It was even worse than Daniel, when he had to draw a shower. Or when Natsuki had to describe a bazaar, but she was mistaken and described the word bizarre. Overall, it was a lot of fun.
Shortly before midnight, I stopped our playing and went to the kitchen. I then returned with six glasses and the champagne Monika brought. Then, we patiently awaited midnight. When the countdown reached 10, we started counting loudly, and at the stroke of midnight, the cork flew out of the bottles, and the glasses were poured fully. We cheered to the new year, wishing each other happy and successful year. After that, Natsuki and Daniel kissed each other under the mistletoe. Alex stepped aside nervously, and accidentally stopped under another branch I hung there before. I contained a victorious smile and instead I smiled happily, catching Alex's attention and pointing on the mistletoe above her head. When she realized what it means, her face turned hellishly red. I came over to her slowly. This was my moment.
Suddenly I saw a flash of coral-blonde mess and backed off instinctively. Sayori saw me approach Alex under the mistletoe, and quickly approached Alex, kissing her on the cheek to save her from the embarrassing situation. Alex looked slightly disappointed, but then she smiled once again. I looked aside and saw Monika, who looked at me and rolled her eyes. I returned to my place on the mattress and sat there, watching the others being happy. My insides were enclosed in anger, but I managed to suppress it. After all, Sayori was my friend. With a lot of self control, I looked aside and stayed in my sitting position.
And that was the new year. After 10 or 15 minutes the room calmed down and we started playing again, again having lots of fun. I managed to win one round, and was satisfied with the evening. Around 2 in the morning, everyone looked tired, and so I said we will go to beds. I told Sayori and Monika to decide who will sleep on a bed and who will sleep on the mattress, and showed Natsuki and Daniel where they will be sleeping. Then, I returned to find out that Sayori will be sleeping on the bed. I didn't mind, since I was slightly better friend with Monika then with Sayori. I took Sayori and Alex with me, and dropped Sayori in her room, before finally showing Alex my room. I made sure all the things that could make me look weird were hidden, and so I felt no fear.
I went inside, Alex behind me. I turned on the lights and heard a clicking noise behind me. I turned and saw that Alex closed the door. My face turned slightly red as my mind started playing all possible reasons why she could have done it. I just stood there calmly, fighting with my primal urges, and flashed Alex a big smile. ,,So, here we are. You will be sleeping here, in my room….´´ I let the silence drag on, still keeping a smile on my face, while waves of excitement rushed through my body. Alex was here and now. She made a step towards me,and I could see her face being red like a tomato, and her smile being more and more fragile. I stood there, holding my breath, anticipating what was about to happen.
,,Yes. Thank you Yuri. You are….. very kind to me. I…. Well, I don't hate it….. And I would like to…. spend more time with you…. if you are alright with that.´´ As I heard the words from Alex, my world shook. I was thinking I would say similar words in this moment, she was only quicker. She made another step towards me, sounding every string that was stretched in my body. I felt the atmosphere grow thick as I too made a step towards her. I could only see her face now. The rest was blurry, since it didn't matter to me. Only Alex. I stretched out my arm to Alex, and she grabbed it and squeezed lightly. I could feel the warm feeling rise on my face. ,,I….. I would love to Alex. I think I…. I like you. A lot. A lot more than the others.´´ As I said this, I made the final step to Alex and put my arms around her body, hugging her lightly. I could feel her arms around my body and I felt like if the world exploded now, I would not care. I was finally with my Alex. That was what mattered.
After some time, we parted, still holding hands. This time, it was her, who moved towards me, but not to hug me. As I realized what she was about to do, I froze as my face took on a shade of a cherry. She leaned in closer to me, making our faces come closer and closer to each other. I too started leaning in, taking in the ecstasy of the moment, knowing that this is the time and place. Our faces were only centimeters apart, and I could feel Alex's hot breath on my face and her heavenly scent overflowed my senses. Alex then leaned in the last few centimeters and connected our noses. She giggled lightly, as she backed off. ,,Boop´´ she said, and I had to giggle as well. After that, we once again leaned towards each other, and this time, I was the once who closed the gap between us, tilting my head slightly, so that our noses wouldn't connect again. As our lips connected, I felt overwhelmed with desire. The feeling was indescribable, a mix between primal satisfaction and modern day happiness. I knew things will not be the same after today.
The next chapter will propably take longer to be on Amino, since I will be writing one more chapter in between, which I will not be able to post on Amino becuase of the Amino rules.
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He does (late response but yea :P)