「59」「Just Some Help」

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The Bit of Chapter 1 for the Re Write of A Tune of the Past

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   ↣伊東 仄

   ↣Itou Honoka

   ≻1.4.19

"Honoka! Hurry up, you'll be late! This is why you should've done your hair last night!" My annoying brother, Yuki, yells at me from outside my bedroom door. He acts as though I'm scared of him. Boys.

"Even if you're right it shouldn't matter to you." Every morning starts with me and Yuki fighting, with Hiroshi in the background being responsible. Yuki and Hiroshi are twins, the only way you can tell them apart is their attitude. Not saying I'm any better though.

"Hiroshi wants to get to school early for some reason. God knows why."

"What does that have to do with me?" I'm in my second year of Junior High. Yuki and Hiroshi are in their third and last.

"So I know you aren't gonna be late."

"Aww. You care about me~" I love making Yuki feel awkward. It's so funny seeing his reaction.

"Not like that, you idiot! So people don't think I have an idiot of a sister." I laugh, thinking he basically just extended his answer. "Fine then, we'll go on our own. Just don't be late."

"Yay, bye." I laugh even more. Oh well, now peace.

"But one more thing. If my reputation is wrecked by you..."

"Good luck." Yay. I love interrupting him too.

"You better watch out." He punches my door, making me jump. "Told ya."

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That's probably all I'm gonna share for now.

I just wanna see if I can get some tips to keep in mind whilst writing it again.

Note: 1.4.19 is the date in the story

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